Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Quick write

The night came and sirens started, the planes come out of nowhere.

"Boom,crash" the war started fire blazing out of the guns the darkness glares as the fighters come along.
People hiding in the houses terrified as the fire and crashes goes on.
The lights are so powerful heading into the sky.
Fighters bombing bombs around the land.

Innocent people in fear while it goes on and on all night. now the  fighters are gone and they are in peace for now,and they will come again 

My goal is to put paragraphs in the right spot

1 comment:

  1. What a great piece of writing Tyla It was really good I enjoyed reading it. I liked your goal I thought it was really good I know you can achieve it because I know that you will try your hardest to get where you want to be. I can't wait to see what you do next. I know that what ever you do will be 2x as good as what you did in this quick write. Keep it up Tyla.